My project is still in the beta stage as I have yet to elaborate on my main points.
This piece will have some issues which will need improvement
Link of rough draft here:
https://docs.google.com/a/email.arizona.edu/document/d/1O-QIFS4frt8MIVWSKkOjo7kyceuOATiyuQ6l59xhzo4/edit?usp=sharing
Hi Eren! Just thought I'd let you know that I can't access your draft (I was going to peer review your podcast) as I need permission to view the document. I'm moving on to someone else but I thought you might want to know so that you can fix the link and get peer review feedback! Thanks and have a beautiful day!
ReplyDeleteEren,
ReplyDeleteYou have solid content but have form issues that you should fix before submitting the final project. The first and easiest issue to fix is adding page numbers. Your post also needs a title, in-text citations, and a properly formatted (MLA?) works cited page.
Your paragraphs are of appropriate length and are laid out well to help develop your arguments. You have a good paper that just needs to be polished.