Below is another editorial report. I believe that the changes I have made have greatly improved the video essay which I feel make my project better overall.
Selection from rough cut:
1:18-2:32
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Re-Edited Selection:
2:02-3:11
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1. The content did not change too much. Instead of holding the focus only on the photos, I occasionally had the camera focus back to me and then to the photos. This was more effective as it reminded authors about who was talking and helped improve the transitions of my video essay.
2. The form changed as I made the photos last longer in the newer version of the video essay. This was to emphasis how poorly the workers were treated with the inhumane living standards the migrants in Qatar had to face.
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