Sunday, April 24, 2016

Editorial Report 13a

Below are the attached link of the rough cut and fine cut. I did a little bit of editing which overall improved the form and content of my video essay.

Selection from Rough-cut:
0:37-1:13
Link

Re-Edited Selection:
1:06-1:23
Link

1. Honestly, the content hardly changed. Apart from pronunciation, tone and a few changes in word choice, nothing changed. The content is being communicated more effectively in the newer version as the camera can record me more clearer with better lighting.

2. The form changed slightly. I changed how the photos were placed in the video as well as when they enter in the video. I feel as though I spoke more clearly with the re-edited version.

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