Sunday, February 7, 2016

Draft of Project 1

I would appreciate any comments or suggestions to improve my essay. I am worried that I may be missing or including certain content which may be unnecessary for this assignment. Thanks!

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  1. Here is my review of your article, mostly just add in some things and clarify some other things and you will have a great article. https://docs.google.com/a/email.arizona.edu/document/d/1kQll24jb9NtCgKeBpY5VyYURDZtUCp1oBx4RiKMEnEA/edit?usp=sharing

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  2. Hey Eren! Here are my comments: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NAkgITlasX55-hKH2SiMZ1Hx5pIAVv0ZF6XqqD-oxgk/edit?usp=sharing

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