Audience questions:
1. The content hardly changed to be honest. I maybe added a few more words but apart form that the content did not change.
2. The form did not change as much either. I added a few more sound effects to make listeners actually feel like they are listening to a podcast.
Rough cut:
Ever since I was small I always had trouble writing. But with practice over time, I have improved consistently improved as a writer. With better sentence structure, trying to limit the use of passive voice and smoother transitions, the fluidity of my writing has improved. From constantly writing in new essays in different genres, readings, using rhetorical strategies, all have helped improve my writing.
Re-edited selection:
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