Peer Review for Sarah

Below is my peer review for Sarah. I hope my feedback will be useful for Sarah in the future.

Audience question: I practiced my editorial skills this week in peer review by giving Sarah suggestions on how to improve her standard college essay

Name: Sarah

Title: Production Report 14b

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Explanation of peer review activity selected: I selected this work to peer review as it looked interesting to me. In addition I have already completed this genre in the past and with my experience I could give my classmate advice from my own opinion.

Explanation of how I helped the author: I helped give the author advice on how she could improve her essay by letting her know to give as much detail as possible. By having Sarah elaborate more on certain points will make her essay stronger.

Explanation of how I used course material in my peer review: By going over the past examples of the genre, and project 4 assignment sheet, I used course material to assess his work while giving feedback.

What I admired or learnt from: I admired the personal tone she used as it made the essay more interesting to read. I was never losing interest when reading her essay, as this personal reflective essay was a great work to read from.