Audience Question: I will organize my project in a clear and
easy to follow outline. Using a well-structured outline will help me write all
my ideas and make sense.
Opening Section:
Intro statement: Over time as a writer I have improved
consistently. With better sentence structure, trying to limit the use of
passive voice and smoother transitions, the fluidity of my writing has
improved. From constantly writing in new essays in different genres and reading
books, my writing has improved.
How to catch reader’s attention: Ever since I was small I always
had trouble writing. But with practice, I have learnt how to improve my
writing.
Main body section 1:
Main idea: How writing in new
genres has improved me as a writer
Evidence: From writing in many different genres from each
project and completing the conventions, I have expanded my knowledge as a
writer by writing in these new unfamiliar forms.
Evidence proves: Evidence proves that as I have written in
different genres such as podcast, video essay, standard college essay and the
quick reference guide.
Why evidence is important: Evidence is important as it
explains as to how I have improved as a writer from writing in new genres.
Main body section 2:
Main idea:
How blog posts has helped my writing
Evidence: Posts such as research reports, peer reviews and
editorial reports has helped me plan my essays better, credibility, and edit
better.
Evidence proves:
How I have improved as writer, peer reviewer, and editor.
Why evidence is important: Evidence is important as it
explains how my writing process has developed from the blog posts, and in class
activities.
Main body section 3:
Main idea:
How I have improved the credibility of my writing.
Evidence: By looking at each source’s reliability and
showing as little bias as possible while using rhetorical strategies in my
writing, my writing’s credibility has developed
Evidence proves: The evidence
proves that by learning how to be more critical about sources I use for my
research and focusing on maintaining a non-bias voice in my writing, my writing
has become more credible.
Why evidence is important:
Evidence is important as it explains to audience as to how
the credibility of my writing has developed.
Closing section:
Explanation of larger significance of subject: By writing in
new genres, blog posts, and focusing on credibility of my writing, my writing process
has improved.
Hi Eren! I think your project is looking like it will be good. I know this is an outline and you were already going to do this, but I'm struggling to find anything else to comment on. Definitely stay conscious of the amount of detail you provide. Specifically concerning your first body section about genre, you sort of repeated the same thing three times but you didn't actually say HOW the different genres helped your writing. Be explicit about it, whether it was a new experience that required different skills that you tapped into, or if it didn't go well and you had to take a lesson from a negative experience, or if maybe you enjoyed the different genres and how that helped your writing, know what I mean? Like I said I'm sure you have something like that planned but this was all I could find to say. Good luck with the project! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is late and therefore quite irrelevant but I’m catching up on some work so here is my review of your content outline.
ReplyDeleteI really like how straightforward your outline is. I completely understand what you are planning on talking about simply based off of what you outlined. You are very clear and concise.
It might help to better satisfy the assignment guidelines if you add in three more pieces of evidence and an extra idea to grab the reader’s attention in the intro and an extra idea to explain the significant in the conclusion.
I hope your project went wonderfully and your semester is finishing up nicely. (: